[MF] Your Punishment, written in first person and I [f] experience it with you [m]. (Constructive criticism welcome)

You get a last-minute invitation to an exclusive kink party and shyly ask if I would like to go over the phone, secretly worrying it is too soon in our relationship but eager to show me this side of you. We already had dinner plans and I can hear the hesitation in your voice but this is something I am curious about and want to experience even if it’s just once and, especially, with you. After discussing details with time, attire, and expectations, both exhilaration and nervousness sweep through me as I accept and hearing both relief and excitement in your voice with my acceptance puts a huge smile on my face. The party is this afternoon and since our plans were evening ones, I quickly get ready and pack my bag with the things we discussed and smirk as I add a few “extras.”

[MF] Your Punishment, written in first person as I [F] am experiencing it with you [M], (first post of my writing and looking for constructive criticism and subreddits to post to for the same)

You get a last-minute invitation to an exclusive kink party and shyly ask if I would like to go over the phone, secretly worrying it is too soon in our relationship but eager to show me this side of you. We already had dinner plans and I can hear the hesitation in your voice but this is something I am curious about and want to experience even if it’s just once and, especially, with you. After discussing details with time, attire, and expectations, both exhilaration and nervousness sweep through me as I accept and hearing both relief and excitement in your voice with my acceptance puts a huge smile on my face. The party is this afternoon and since our plans were evening ones, I quickly get ready and pack my bag with the things we discussed and smirk as I add a few “extras.”