My [f]irst atte[m]pt at a sexy story

While this is kind of a start, I wanted to know if people would like me to continue this style of writing.

Warm lights surrounded me as I slowly closed the door softly. She was wrapped up in a big duvet, laying on our sofa. I took my coat off and hung in on a hook; before slowly approaching her. I spoke, a calm tone constructed in my voice "Hey gorgeous, how was your day?" She let out a small giggle before rising off the sofa, the duvet sliding onto the floor. Crimson red quickly stuck to my eye; broadening my view, she wore a sexy crimson bra covering her perfectly shaped breasts of which I desired, no… craved for, for so long. Laced knickers covered her lower down zone, the warm lights caused a blood-red shadow to bleed onto her skin. Her slick body; a honeyglow tan colour shone in the light. Her pearly white teeth bit her lip, she knew I found this so sexy and irrestible. Her eyes… My weakness… The blue crystal eyes became envious for love.