[mF] [mFM] Journey into the dark , My life

I am by no means a pro writer. I am a man who has lived some… experiences. Telling these stories to others through the years several have told me I should write them all in a book. Well i took them up on it started a website with a few on it (still adding to it). Some of them are my true experiences and some are fabricated using several bits and pieces from other life experiences. I would like to know others thoughts on them as well as my style of writing. LINK IN COMMENTS

Looking for feedback on a few stories.

I am by no means a pro writer. I am a man who has lived some… experiences. Telling these stories to others through the years several have told me I should write them all in a book. Well i took them up on it and created a website with them on it. Some of them are my true experiences and some are fabricated using several bits and pieces from other life experiences. I would like to know others thoughts on them as well as my style of writing.

www.thebrokencollection.com