“Goodnight, babygirl. I’ll see you tomorrow.” (Original HARD Version) [TW, Rape, Extreme, Brutal, Incest, Anal, Light Scat, Potential Breeding, Bloody, Feet, Anal Creampie, Big Dick Small Girl, Hardcore, Violent]

Yesterday I posted a [cleaner version](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/ho0377/goodnight_babygirl_ill_see_you_tomorrow_rape/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x) of this which was the finished version of a commission I made. I received a couple comments and DMs saying they wanted to see the Original Uncensored/Hard Version of the Draft before the censoring so I figured I’d post it separately. Without further ado, I present to you the harder version of yesterday’s post.

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The sun was slowly rising over the snowy peaks of the mountain ahead. Normally, in this time of year people were leaving Alaska to go somewhere warmer and safer. Sara had other plans though. This tiny and cheerful 29 year old, might be standing at a mere 1,60 but she’s determined to travel deep into the frozen Alaskan wilds in order to finally spend some time with her biological dad. It has already been 25 years since her parents decided to end their relationship. Sara never explicitly learned the reason why they broke it off but they were never actually married and from the few times she spent time with her dad he seemed like a sweet man so she understood that it was nothing of her concern. Plus, when your father offers to put you up for a whole weekend in order to try and make up for all the years wasted you don’t exactly say no.

“Goodnight, babygirl. I’ll see you tomorrow”. [Rape, Incest, Anal, Anal Creampie, Big Dick Small Girl, Hardcore, Violent, TW]

This was a commission I received yesterday and finished a couple hours ago. The first/original draft was a lot harder and nastier but things were ultimately cut to fit the request. Overall, I’m very satisfied with the result and I would love your input on it.

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The sun was slowly rising over the snowy peaks of the mountain ahead. Normally, in this time of year people were leaving Alaska to go somewhere warmer and safer. Sara had other plans though. This tiny and cheerful 29 year old, might be standing at a mere 1,60 but she’s determined to travel deep into the frozen Alaskan wilds in order to finally spend some time with her biological dad. It has already been 25 years since her parents decided to end their relationship. Sara never explicitly learned the reason why they broke it off but they were never actually married and from the few times she spent time with her dad he seemed like a sweet man so she understood that it was nothing of her concern. Plus, when your father offers to put you up for a whole weekend in order to try and make up for all the years wasted you don’t exactly say no.

Post-Festival Shenanigans [Foot Fetish, Big Cock Tiny Girl, Anal, Rough Sex]

I’ve been sitting on this in my cloud notes for approximately 6-7 years now. It’s the first and only piece I ever wrote and as such I don’t believe it is anything more than a juvenile attempt at making a story out of an experience you loved in an attempt to relive it. The events, as mentioned, are real (names changed of course) and I’m curious to see what you think about it. Maybe I should pick it up as a hobby. Maybe it’s for the best I never wrote again after this. I’m open to both opinions and due to that comments and PMs are welcome.

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As some of you may know in early june,Download festival which is one of the biggest metal/rock events of the year, takes place at Donnington, UK. This year i went with John and George, who i literally met 2 days prior in order to form a group. On the last day of the festival ( Sunday june 16th), Kylie, who is a friend of John’s and happens to be perhaps the hottest 18 year old girl i’ve seen, joined us.