New writer (and new account) looking for feedback

Hi new friends, I’m a long-time writer, but just recently started writing Erotica. I’d love your feedback on my first posted work. You’ll find it [here](https://www.patreon.com/subtlemovements), but don’t worry – it’s FREE.

I’m specializing in short stories (~3000 words) that feature strong female leads in straight sex encounters.

Thanks for reading!