I have the beginning of a scene right in the middle of a story that I am writing right now. So before this scene things have happened, and even more things will, obviously, happen.
Here comes my question: would you like more from that scene? Does the beginning intrigue you, or is the style offputting? English is not my first language, so I experimented a bit here, and I would love to get some feedback. The story is plotted out to about 25 chapters right now, and will mainly be erotic, mostly BDSM centric. So I thought here could be a good place to get feedback. If people like it I’ll post complete scenes once enough of them are done
Thanks in advance for your feedback
This is straight from my writing app, so there is no formatting done, soooo sorry for that ?
Now: story time!