[M/F] [Str8]Tips and tweaks from the ladies needed

First off, I’m a guy, and I’m not a writer. Never have been, and probably never will be. This all started because I have a ridiculous hotwife fantasy. She doesn’t want to sleep with anyone else, so I’ve tried to think of other things to kinda satisfy the fantasy. Now she is a writer, and good at it, though she’s never written any kind of erotica. My idea was that she could come up with a story of her own (fictional) account of cheating on me while at work. My intent was to help fulfill the fantasy for me while also giving her a chance to be creative and tell me a bit more of what she would like. She agreed, just wasn’t sure where to start, so I thought I could maybe give an outline for her to complete with detail. It started out that way, as you will notice in the beginning, but I got into it, and carried away. It’s written from her perspective to tell me, but again, I’m a guy. I can only go at what I guess at and my imagination, so any tips and/or tweaks to make it more realistic would be greatly appreciated. Again, I’m not a writer, I just got carried away, but now I wonder if her reading it might be a good turn on for her, so I want it to be awesome, lol

Tips and tweaks from the ladies needed

First off, I’m a man, and I’m not a writer. Never have been, and probably never will be. This all started because I have a ridiculous hotwife fantasy. She doesn’t want to sleep with anyone else, so I’ve tried to think of other things to kinda satisfy the fantasy. Now she is a writer, and good at it, though she’s never written any kind of erotica. My idea was that she could come up with a story of her own (fictional) account of cheating on me while at work. My intent was to help fulfill the fantasy for me while also giving her a chance to be creative and tell me a bit more of what she would like. She agreed, just wasn’t sure where to start, so I thought I could maybe give an outline for her to complete with detail. It started out that way, as you will notice in the beginning, but I got into it, and carried away. It’s written from her perspective to tell me, but again, I’m a guy. I can only go at what I guess at and my imagination, so any tips and/or tweaks to make it more realistic would be greatly appreciated. Again, I’m not a writer, I just got carried away, but now I wonder if her reading it might be a good turn on for her, so I want it to be awesome, lol