A COVID romance dom/sub long distance

Just wanted to get some feedback on my story :

Set up : you are a hard working young professional for an insurance agency call center during covid you’ve been assigned to a special project that requires collaboration with team members from all across the US . You really want to move up and believe this might be the opportunity you’ve been hoping for. You finally meet with another peer in Texas to discuss the project.

Part 1 : Zoom phone rings
Hi there it’s Ryan great to finally hear your voice after all these messages back and forth can you see me I’ll turn my cam on. Can you see me? Great I figured it would be easier to explain the scoring process if you can see me and my screen. Let me walk you through the escalation and scoring processes. I just sent the link to the spreadsheet; it has to be updated each time you…. (Gasps) your camera is on. Oh yeah I can see you too. Wow. Clears throat.
No, nothing is wrong; it’s just the uh the cam quality is just clearer than I expected. Since COVID hit I’ve been doing so many virtual meetings it’s nice to actually see a face again. Oh your one of the chosen few like me stuck in the office? Yea I feel like I’m not so alone in this office anymore us chatting every day has been…. Nice. I’m glad you like it too. Let’s chat again tomorrow.