Com[f]ort [f]rom a dear friend

Hey guys, I'm Shannon. I'm workshopping my new novel, and I was hoping to get some feedback. Please let me know what you think!


I was in over my head. I knew I was. I was living on my own for the first time in my life, in a one bedroom apartment on the south side of town, paying my own bills, buying my own groceries. My job barely brought in enough money to keep my head above water, and my student loan debt was growing by leaps and bounds every semester.

By being very careful with my spending, I was able to set aside about $1000 over the course of October and November for Christmas presents for my friends and family. Then, on the very first day of December, I was driving through an intersection and a Blazer clipped my back end. I screamed out loud while my car spun around, and I just caught sight of the other car as it drove away.

The repairs totally wiped out my Christmas fund and cut my grocery budget in half for the week.