Short unfinished erotic story: ‘The Plumber’

Hello everyone.

I am brand new to erotic writing and I actually wrote this as a role play, but anyway, if there are no takers to it I am very tempted to develop it into a story maybe even a screenplay. Enough of my yabbering, enjoy…

*As Rita peers to her cork pin board hanging on the wall, she scans each of the plumber business cards until she spots one attached with a photo. An athletic but well built chap, a secret photo of him wearing just jeans and a pair of gloves tightening a large outside valve with a wrench, the name below saying ‘Mark’. Rita standing in her lounge looks back towards her kitchen as she holds a spanner wearing only a silk gown. A set of pipes start to fizz and spit water around a joint, water seeps out onto the worktops and floor.*