Submit the Demons (ch. 5)

The scroll was made to be a pretty basic scroll, but it was like a whole new world for me. It described how to really use cum when fucking or just doing anything. The first step was to leave a strand of your will in your cum, that way you can make everyone you fucked submit to you. Before I was just lucky to get cum addicted succubi, but if I would have gotten any other race, I wouldn’t be so happy right now.

To get to that point, I had to move my conciousness into my balls, where it can mix with my cum, but there’s the risk of my cum taking over my conciousness by doing this. If that happens, I’ll turn into an animal that only lives for fucking.

Submit the demons (chapeter 4)

Any critique is appreciated.

I had allmost no sleep when I went to the base of the guards. It was a huge building. It has five floors and twenty windows per floor. The door was double the size of me, which intimidated me in a strange way. There were two statues on each side, like ethernal guards guarding the house. I didn’t even need to enter, because the head of the guards allready stepped outside and greeted me, “I see, you took your friends with you.” She stressed the ‘friends’ in a hositle maner. “Not my friends, these four are my slaves. Only she is a friend.” “It doesn’t really matter. Let’s get to the business. What do you want from me?”

“First I want informations from you. And I want some materials. The materials are easier, so I’ll ask them first. I want some ropes. A lot of them, and I also want some of your weapons. As for information, I want to know how humans can use sexual energy and some techniques of the men all these years ago. Information about Palemoon town and who you are. I think that wouldn’t be asked to much, right?”

Submit the Demons (Chapter 3)

The previous chapters are on my profile. Any help for me to improve my writing is highly appreciated.

“Not for now. Follow me with the other four.” I hoped, that I only have to submit the demoness to make all of them follow me, and I was right. “Please master. Please fuck me more. I will do everything you want. Please fuck me.” “No, you wanted to enslave me before and this is your punishement. For the next week, I will fuck other girls, while you have to watch. With your hands bound behind your back. And it’s going to be a day longer for every sound you make from now on.” I hoped that she wouldn’t just kill me or run away, because I could’t stop her, but I made the right bet. She just looked at me with anger but she was still silent. She really was addicted to my cock. No, probably it was my cum.

Submit the Demons (MFFFFF) (Chapter 2)

This is the second one, read the [first chapter](https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/jlijmh/submit_the_demons_mffff_chapter_1/) to understand the context.

When I made that discovery I came again and the place in my balls was emptied but started to fill itself again. That way I could fuck until my body is exhausted, but cock will allways cum. The space enlarged itself from time to time and could hold more cum.

The demoness made me cum at least five times and the cumloads were bigger each load. Her face started to be filled with pleasure and it wasn’t deadpan anymore. She let out some moans and her eyes roled up. “I didn’t think you would have such an endurace. I really underestimated you. You would make a good sex servant. I won’t kill you today by draining you empty.” She did it again. She was talking nonesense again. I will maybe make her my sexslave. But I’m not going to be anybody’s sexslave. But at the moment I could really do nothing. She said to the four demons, “Each one of you can get one load to. You better do your best.” The one on my right leg was going first.

Submit the demons (MFFFF) (Chapter 1)

I am trying to write a nsfw noval, a cultivation noval to be precise. Any tips and tricks are wished.

That day I had a strange dream, I dreamt something stange. A goddess visited me in my sleep. According to her, she is the goddess of love, reproduction and most importantly sex. She blessed me in a strange way. Actually she just let me see her naked. It was blessing because her body was godlike. I guess she really deserves to be the goddess of sex. Her breast were the best possible size, big but not huge. Her ass was a bubble-but. I would loved to grope her, but I couldn’t move somehow. The rest of her body looked smoother than polished marble. But the best was her little pussy. The moment I looked at her pussy I woke up and couldn’t remember how it looked. My underpants were filled with sperm, I must have just cum from just looking at her pussy.