This is the first part of a long story. It’s about 90% true with some of the dialogue dressed up for the sake of making it interesting, and because my buddy who’s helping me write the story from his perspective can’t remember everything he said. My question: does it take too long to get to the action?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ci9QCMLwGapDdOWqf-UC57aWnCG6OxKxTvhvMmydnlQ/edit?usp=sharing