Hi, everyone. I've gotten my tools mostly done, and an almost feature complete new engine for the game to run on. Now I need some writers who have the talent and time to add a good deal of content.

I created a snippet from the dev tools where you can submit a sample of what you can make, which works roughly the same as actually adding content to the game. (Some things are stripped out for simplification, like the map and tools for creating and editing things other than Scenarios)

Some guidelines

• Familiarize yourself with the game and what it's about by playing it. http://www.playlewd.com/demo.html You need to have writing that's a somewhat similar style, and it needs to fit within the context of the game. (Scifi, another solar system, really lewd, aliens, etc) While the style needs to be similar, such as being second person and more emotive than verbose, you absolutely don't have to mirror it! Varying styles are fine. That link of the game is running on the old engine, and there are some bugs with it. I haven't ported it over yet.

• Your writing should at least be as good as what's in the game currently. Read more »

I've been working on a choose-your-own-adventure game, and I'd like some feedback if anyone has the time to give some.

I posted about this a really long time ago here, like 10 months ago. Back then some friends had helped me with some content, since I was too busy actually doing the programming the write much, andddd it just wasn't good. So I stripped all that out and wrote the rest myself.

http://www.playlewd.com and click "play" to see, and start reading.

There's parts I'm particular proud of, when I really enjoyed writing. Then there's other parts that are rather dry and mundane, because I was just making myself write. I don't really have a good work ethic with writing, I guess.

If anything is particularly convoluted, boring, or doesn't read/flow well, let me know if you would.

I know some parts are particularly short, but that's often on purpose. Not everyone wants to read something that's really long, so I avoid needlessly describing too much at times where the story needs to move along.

edit: Er, I made that title too short. I should have put that it's a game in there. Ah well~

http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/sadtaco/lewd-an-erotic-text-adventure is the Kickstarter link.

http://www.playlewd.com/demo.html is the demo.

I went ahead and deleted http://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/1d1rcd/lewd_an_erotic_text_adventure_game/ so there wouldn't be two of these on the front page. I noticed some people who originally voted it up were voting it down after a few days, probably to keep it from being at the top so long. :3

There is lots of information about it on the Kickstarter page. Go ahead and give any other questions or comments that you may have here!