Sold to the Cyborg Part 2&3 (M/F) [tied up] [dub con]

Author’s Note: This is my first time writing erotica so I would love to get your feedback on the story and my writing. Part 1 is fairly tame but Part 2 and 3 are not. Thank you in advance for your help, I appreciate it!

All characters in this story are above 18 years of age and the author does not condone or encourage any activities which might be classified as illegal in the real world.

**Part 2:**

I was having the loveliest dream I could ever remember having. I was lying on the luscious grass of a beautiful meadow in the countryside, something I had only seen in pictures. I grew up in an inner city orphanage and had always yearned for air that wasn’t polluted by industrial complexes and megastructures. Living among the dredges of society for so long made wild, untamed nature seem like an entirely different world.

Even still, the man between my legs made it hard to really care about the scenery. The breezy material of my skirts were rucked up around my waist, making room for the man’s head as he flicked his tongue insistently at my clit, a strong hand pressing down on my hips to subdue my bucking.

Sold to the Cyborg Part 1 (M/F) [tied up] [dub con]

Author’s Note: This is my first time writing erotica so I would love to get your feedback on the story and my writing. Part 1 is fairly tame but Part 2 and 3 are not. Thank you in advance for your help, I appreciate it!

All characters in this story are above 18 years of age and the author does not condone or encourage any activities which might be classified as illegal in the real world.

**Part 1:**

“What is this specimen?”

I heard the words hazily, as if through water. There was also a telltale, subtle lag as my shitty translator relayed the meaning just a bit slower than it should.

“It’s a human sir. It was caught trespassing in the Grey Streets.”

The Grey Streets? I thought groggily. That’s the quarter of the city where the cyborgs and other synthetics, or synths, lurk. Organics weren’t allowed in there unless they had official business reasons or a permit. Even through the pounding in my head, I felt a small flash of pity for whichever human was foolish enough to trespass there.

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