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Dirty Shorts – Erica – The One Night Stand

We crashed through the door awkwardly, I’m not sure you can do it gracefully when you are all over each other like we were. My hands running up and down his back, feeling as much of his muscular frame as they could through his tight grey shirt. I could feel his hand doing the same to my back, teasing my as they traced my spine from my shoulders all the way down to my ass electricity coursed through me at his touch, it was like my blue dress wasn’t even there. 

We stumbled into his college room in his shared flat the door shutting behind us, finally alone, my mind thought in excitement. I’d been waiting for this for most of the night, ever since this tall, handsome man in my arms had introduced himself so confidently at that bar, and now after almost four hours of teasing, I was like putty in his strong hands.

Erica -The One Night Stand – Part 1

Hi guys, would appreciate comments and feedback on my story here. [https://www.literotica.com/s/erica-the-one-night-stand](https://www.literotica.com/s/erica-the-one-night-stand)

I’m curious if you think my writing is good enough to sell?

R x

The Two Scarletts

Hey guys,

Had my second story published on literotica, I’d appreciate ratings and feedback :).

[https://www.literotica.com/s/the-two-scarletts](https://www.literotica.com/s/the-two-scarletts) enjoy!

R

Section from a short story I’m writing, what do you think?

After dinner we decided to go for a walk through the surrounding streets, it had been snowing earlier after we arrived and I wanted to see it. You protested but I managed to wear you down into going for a short walk with me.

It was dark and cold, snow covered the floor as we made our way home arms linked as well walked together. I was bundled up, so wrapped up against the cold all you could see was a pair of eyes and my scarlet hair cascading down my shoulders. You weren’t even wearing a hat just a thick coat and your gorgeous blonde hair.

“You English girls are so soft,” you teased me, “it’s not that cold Scarlet.” You stepped away from me pulling my hat off my head. Skipping out of my reach as I grabbed for it.

I stamped my feet letting out a frustrated moan at you. “Dammit Scarlett it’s freezing, give it back!” I lunged at you but you skipped out of reach again giggling at me.

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Categorized as Erotica