This is my first story, so any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is extremely welcome. Just don’t be a dick please.
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“So how long do I have again?” Anna asked.
I looked over at her, grinning. She was a short girl, but with curves in all the right places. Short brunette hair, pale skin, she was a vision, especially in the tank top and gym shorts she was wearing. How she was with me, a tall, nerdy goth was beyond me.
“2 minutes. Then I start the chase,” I explained to her again. She’d already asked twice, but I figured it was the nerves. I don’t think she’d ever participated in this type of activity before, so I know she was on edge, which suited me fine. “After my timer goes off, then I start the hunt.”
She stared apprehensively at the woods we were at. I could tell she was thinking about many different scenarios that could go wrong, so I tried to alleviate her worries. “I have a medkit, we have our phones on us, and if you’re hurt, just call for me. I’ll come immediately and we’ll get ya taken care of.”