So I am taking a stab at my first erotic novel and would love some feedback. This is chapter 1.
If you are interested in reading more, you can find it at [http://playfullifestyle.com/island-discovery-an-erotic-novel/](http://playfullifestyle.com/island-discovery-an-erotic-novel/)
Thanks for your time.
She took one last deep breath, holding it as though it were the last of her resolve. When she finally let it go, the decision was made. After all, she reasoned, who would ever know? They were on vacation, alone, far from home. Besides, it wasn’t as though the dress was *that* scandalous. They sold them by the thousands at the mall; just not to women like her. It was short, tight, and revealed the cleft between her soft breasts. Not exactly cleavage, mind you, but enough to let you know she had something there. The two tiny straps that draped over her shoulders did nothing to hold it in place – While Mother Nature hadn’t been generous with her in that department, she gave her all she needed for that task – but they prevented her from wearing any sort of a bra underneath. Compared to what she normally wore, Jen felt very exposed.