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Tim noticed that Jen was unusually hungry. Normally, she opted for a fairly small breakfast, but this morning was different. He was hungry, too. He had slept well and felt rested. After the events of the previous evening, he wasn’t surprised. Things had escalated pretty quickly with Kate and Mickey, and although he had “finished” in the hot tub, he still had work to do once they got back to the privacy of their own room. Jen was more than a little worked up, too. She hadn’t cum in the pool, but that didn’t mean she didn’t like what they had done. In fact, at one point she actually had him sit on a chair so that she could straddle him again, reliving the experience. She said very little as she moved from one orgasm to the next, but it was clear that she had thoroughly enjoyed their first experiences with exhibitionism and voyeurism.
He watched as she finished the last of her banana pancakes, while he nursed a final cup of coffee.