Just Friends Chapter 1?

Hey guys, this is my first chapter of my story. This is my first time making and posting stuff like this. My friend and I worked hard on it and we want criticism. Plz no hate <3

Just Friends Chapter 1
By: NightyBoi
Edited By: My Friend
Tags: BDSM, Ecchi, Harem, Reverse Rape, Consensual, Sex Toys

I pushed her into the wall and put my hands between her. Making eye contact, I leaned in to kiss her. She leaned in more and she slapped me. I knew what I had to do, after I exhumed my breath into her I pushed her onto the bed. I felt chills on my spine, as has her. The more I waited the more she wanted it. There was the sound of a door opening. Her parents were home, They slowly came up the stairs, as I try to leave. I panic, not knowing what to do and hid under her bed. I waited and waited, wanting to come out, but she insisted for me to stay.