Cross posted from r/erotica . This is my first story and am looking for feedback and tips for writing. More stories, of these characters and others are on the way. Hope you enjoy <3
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The party wasn’t her scene but Trixie’s best friend convinced her to come. Trixe was a typical collage freshman, 19, hard working, a bit of a shut in but still social when she felt like it. Trixie’s bestie, Martha, and her boyfriend were in the middle of the living room, dancing and having a good time, while trixe was just minding herself in the kitchen, unsure of what to do.
That’s when they walked in, at first glance they looked like a typical frat boy, but then you got to see the whole picture, under that varsity jacket was a tight crop top, showing of thier chest with just the right amount of cleavage. They wore a pair of black leggings that perfectly showed off thier tight ass, and a smug grin on an adorable face to top it all off. Tixie’s little heart could almost explode, she had been crushin on this person for so long, Skyler.