Chapter One – A Trade in Trysia

Hey, I’ve been sitting on this story for a while now. Please let me know what you think as I’m eager for feedback :)

This first part is pretty slow but it sets us up well for a chapter two ;)

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Fey scrambled along the busy dockside in the search of her Trademaster, Rsun. He had sent her out earlier that morning to purchase Trysian Pearls, a shimmering violet pearl unique to these waters. Rsun would usually insist on haggling the trade himself, but he had stated that they would receive a better price if Fey were the one sent to negotiate. For this, she was grateful, as any opportunity for a slice of freedom was a blessing.

The dockside was a hive of activity; with sailors clambering from ships, merchants selling their wares at wooden stalls and city guards monitoring the chaos the best they could. Fey was no stranger to Trysia, as she and her Trademaster had travelled here yesteryear. The modest city had a sort of rustic charm in its weather-beaten storefronts and homes. She could lose herself as she spent too much time gazing at the many faces and peoples of the dock.

Lily’s Quest – Part Two [Mf][oral][fantasy]

Hey! I’m back with chapter two of this smutty fantasy story. Looking for as much feedback as possible, so if you leave a comment with your thoughts, I’d be very appreciative. Hopefully, this isn’t too long for you folks.

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Chapter Two – The Company of Garrello Ostinar

Lily walked down the wooden flight of stairs and into the tavern’s food hall. The hall was filled with about twenty or so folk, most of which were men. Eyes all over the room looked at her, some stealing quick glances whilst others stared obviously. One man, sitting on his own near the front, had a devilish grin painted across his face as he drank up Lily’s petite body. Her insides fluttered with excitement from this new form of attention.

She returned the devilish man with a faint smile, and then walked over to the tavern bar. The only two people seated at the bar were two peculiar looking figures: one a slight-built man wearing a long turquoise cloak, and the other a bulky brutish man, wearing a battered looking breastplate, and a longsword clasped to his waist. Both the men where murmuring amongst themselves very quietly, clearly not wanting to be overheard. Lily thought better of it than to seat herself next to those men, so she sat several seats along.

Lily’s Quest – Part Two [Mf][oral][fantasy]

Hey! I’m back with chapter two of this smutty fantasy story. Looking for as much feedback as possible, so if you leave a comment with your thoughts, I’d be very appreciative. Hopefully, this isn’t too long for you folks.

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Chapter Two – The Company of Garrello Ostinar

Lily walked down the wooden flight of stairs and into the tavern’s food hall. The hall was filled with about twenty or so folk, most of which were men. Eyes all over the room looked at her, some stealing quick glances whilst others stared obviously. One man, sitting on his own near the front, had a devilish grin painted across his face as he drank up Lily’s petite body. Her insides fluttered with excitement from this new form of attention.

She returned the devilish man with a faint smile, and then walked over to the tavern bar. The only two people seated at the bar were two peculiar looking figures: one a slight-built man wearing a long turquoise cloak, and the other a bulky brutish man, wearing a battered looking breastplate, and a longsword clasped to his waist. Both the men where murmuring amongst themselves very quietly, clearly not wanting to be overheard. Lily thought better of it than to seat herself next to those men, so she sat several seats along.

Lily’s Quest – Part One [f][mast][exh][fantasy]

Hey! This is the first story I’ve ever written so I’m looking for as much feedback as possible. So be sure to leave a comment letting me know your thoughts. If you folk like this part, I’ll go ahead and continue to write more of ‘Lily’s Quest’. This part is a little light on *action*, but the plan is for a lot more of it in future chapters.

Enjoy!

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Chapter One – The Royal Loch Inn

Lily handed the rustic barkeeper a few coppers, and grabbed her flagon of ale. Frothing with white bubbling foam, she gulped at her drink, letting her worries wash away, if only for a few hours. With a heavy sigh, she lowered her drink and wiped away the residual foam from her upper lip.

Lily was currently seated at the bar of *The Royal Loch Inn*, a homely enough establishment with a varied clientele of traders, travellers and the occasional questing knight. In the corner of the room, a local bard played a soft, mellow tune on his lute. As the tavern is situated on one of the main roads towards *Easthaven*, a prosperous trading hub within the empire, the tavern and the surrounding village benefit from the protection of an imperial garrison.

Lily’s Quest – Part One [f][mast][exh][fantasy]

Hey! This is the first story I’ve ever written so I’m looking for as much feedback as possible. So be sure to leave a comment letting me know your thoughts. If you folk like this part, I’ll go ahead and continue to write more of ‘Lily’s Quest’. This part is a little light on *action*, but the plan is for a lot more of it in future chapters.

Enjoy!

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Chapter One – The Royal Loch Inn

Lily handed the rustic barkeeper a few coppers, and grabbed her flagon of ale. Frothing with white bubbling foam, she gulped at her drink, letting her worries wash away, if only for a few hours. With a heavy sigh, she lowered her drink and wiped away the residual foam from her upper lip.

Lily was currently seated at the bar of *The Royal Loch Inn*, a homely enough establishment with a varied clientele of traders, travellers and the occasional questing knight. In the corner of the room, a local bard played a soft, mellow tune on his lute. As the tavern is situated on one of the main roads towards *Easthaven*, a prosperous trading hub within the empire, the tavern and the surrounding village benefit from the protection of an imperial garrison.