heyo!! this is my first time posting something i’ve written on reddit. i hope i tagged everything okay, let me know if there’s anything i should’ve added. i’m also very out of practice writing erotica, so critique is welcome.
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A mistake? Possibly.
But did she want it? Absolutely.
Melissa felt like she absolutely couldn’t help herself. Her date with the latest of several men, a skinny dude who made her smile – it wasn’t like she didn’t like him. Genuinely. He was handsome, and she thought his curly red hair was adorable.
At the same time, all through their date, even in between him genuinely interesting her – she thought vaguely of him. Ugh!
She couldn’t take it anymore. Her frustration came to a head – why spend so much time still sad over the way things fell apart with her last partner?
Mike had a gentle smile on his face. He was a good kisser. He made her feel comfortable, and her enjoyment of that mixed, stirred by that smile, and she practically pulled him inside.