Looking for writing feedback!

I’m writing a little story for myself, and would love some feedback/impressions. It is about a newcomer to the BDSM club scene, focusing on character development at the moment.
If you’d like to read, reply or dm me for the doc link

Will someone read my BDSM intro?

[M/F] [BDSM] [D/s]
I’m writing something just for myself but I would love some general impression feedback! It is not edited so far so just seeking impressions.

It’s a newcomer to the BDSM community story