So I’m writing my first erotic romance novel. I am not too well read in the genre. Can a erotica veteran tell me if this scene is too harecore?
“Say it,” he says and rubs between my legs a little faster. The pleasure is indescribable. Every fiber of my body shivers at his command.
“Take me,” I whisper, my voice breaking from the pleasure.
“Do you want me to put my cock inside you?”
I moan and nod. He chuckles and nibbles at my neck while his free hand massages my nipples. “Say it,” he whispers in my ear.
I sink my nails in the flesh of his back and he exhale . My body is his, he can take me in any way he wants. He is on top of me now, rubbing against my open legs. My body longs for him. I am dripping with desire, but he still withholds the ultimate pleasure from me.
“Say you want my hard cock inside you.”