Lesbians in a Dorm with a Twist (Vanilla) (Oral) (Relationship)

These characters are both in their 20s.
Any and all criticism is welcome.

Dolly and Marie were already making out before they even got through the door to their dorm. They shut the door and started tearing each other’s shirts and bras off. Dolly cupped one of Marie’s breasts as their tongues intertwined. Marie fell to her knees and brought Dolly’s pants down. Marie’s eyes widened, taking in her partner’s beauty. Without a second thought, she went to town on her. Her hands laid on her partner’s thighs as her tongue outlined the inside of Dolly’s vagina. She was looking for the sweet spot. Dolly put her hands on Marie’s head when she did.

“Ooooh yeah, right there. Oooooh, FUCK!” Dolly put one hand on the upper back of Marie’s head, and the other hand on her partner’s chin to make sure her tongue didn’t move out of place. She started grinding on Marie’s face. Marie could feel Dolly’s body getting hotter and wetter against her face. Marie watched her partner squeeze her eyes shut and tightened her grip on her head. She sped up her grinding until

“AAAAA”

I want someone to take my virginity.

I’ve wanted a relationship for a while, that’s why I joined a couple dating apps. Bumble, Tinder, Hinge, all to find someone that liked me as much as I liked them. It was… an experience. I wasn’t stoked about having to pay the ability to see people that swiped right on me, not that many people did anyway. Eventually, one worked out! I met a lovely person on Hinge and I love talking to her. While I’m definitely getting the romance I want, she’s not going to take my virginity. She’s Asexual. She’s tried sex before and doesn’t like it. That’s all perfectly valid, I wouldn’t be staying with her if no sex was a deal breaker for me, but I still want to lose my virginity. I want to explore someone’s body. I want things to get hot while we make out and feel each other under our clothes. I want to us to pleasure each other. I want to feel someone wrapped around me. I want to press my body as close as I can to her when I cum.