These characters are both in their 20s.
Any and all criticism is welcome.
Dolly and Marie were already making out before they even got through the door to their dorm. They shut the door and started tearing each other’s shirts and bras off. Dolly cupped one of Marie’s breasts as their tongues intertwined. Marie fell to her knees and brought Dolly’s pants down. Marie’s eyes widened, taking in her partner’s beauty. Without a second thought, she went to town on her. Her hands laid on her partner’s thighs as her tongue outlined the inside of Dolly’s vagina. She was looking for the sweet spot. Dolly put her hands on Marie’s head when she did.
“Ooooh yeah, right there. Oooooh, FUCK!” Dolly put one hand on the upper back of Marie’s head, and the other hand on her partner’s chin to make sure her tongue didn’t move out of place. She started grinding on Marie’s face. Marie could feel Dolly’s body getting hotter and wetter against her face. Marie watched her partner squeeze her eyes shut and tightened her grip on her head. She sped up her grinding until
“AAAAA”