Hello! I’m new to this sub reddit so here I go! Also, I know my grammar is abysmal, as is my spelling. Some critique and what you like about it would be greatly appreciated!
Rainy night
It was a hot summer night in the down town of the city. The lights from the skyscrapers in the distance seemed to beam burning lights as it faded into more subtle nuanced light in the smaller buildings. The air was filled with electricity, a light tingling jolt down your spine to give you goosebumps.
A couple were walking past a flickering neon sign, casually conversing.
“Fern, did you like the picnic idea? I know it’s not a fancy restaurant, but I thought it would be more personal”
Fern, a young slender woman in her mid 20’s, gave a big smile”
“I really enjoyed it Marlen! I never thought a picnic could be as fun as it was today.”
The few stars you could see were covered in a thick swarm of clouds. A few droplets precipitated and fell down
“Are we suppose to get rain?”
“I’m not sure…”