I’ve started a new short story and would appreciate a little feedback on the very beginning part. I haven’t written in quite a while but suddenly felt motivated to do so today. I will say that I’m not crazy about the character names but I can go back and change them later. Just…can someone tell me if this is a decent start in the right direction?
Thank you!
‘Just go out there’, she thought to herself. Here she was finally on a vacation, away from all the chaos back home, and she was too nervous to step out onto the beach. She was afraid to be seen. She spent so long deliberately covering her body and now she was standing in a bathing suit that showed way more of her figure than she was prepared to reveal. The suit hugged tightly around her waist and hips, accentuating the curvature of her bottom. She needed to learn to let go and enjoy her time there but with so many around her, was that even possible?