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Part 1: Change
Autumm woke up and found that she could not move. The side of her face felt wet with saliva. She was gagged. Not having her glasses, Autumm could not make out much in the dim room. She was aware the was stripped nude, and she was strapped into stirrups. Her neck was intensely sore.
“Finally woke up eh?”
She glanced left and made out the figure of a hulking man.
“I pumped you full of a drug to prep you. It should kick in any second now.”
Her body felt swollen and hot, but the effect was grossly pronounced around her groin and nipples. Autumn’s vulva was slick with juice trickling out, and unnaturally swollen and red. Her labia were puffy and hot. Meanwhike, her nipples were purple, engorged, and tender.
Desperately, she tried to protest, but being heavily sedated, she could inly manage some weak whimpers.
Shocks rippled through her body as the man roughly handled her teats.