Hoping for more feedback on my m/m fanfic, maybe?

So, I don’t know where to dump this. I was thinking a fanfiction forum would work, but I’ve done it, and I’ve felt so *ashamed* there. I’m hoping maybe some of you nice people can tell me what I can improve on with this? Or spam me with A+++ or winking emojis. “Kys” is fine too. I just wanna know what people think. Thank you. And yeah, it’s for a cartoon. The characters are aged up in this. There’s really some good fanart out there for this fandom.

**Title:** From Hell With Love

**Pair:** Stan Marsh / Craig Tucker

**Chapters:** 3/?

**Fandom:** South Park

**Rating:** Explicit

**Summary**

*“I’d rather get screwed than life screw me.”*

Officially a couple since high-school, Stan and Craig have quickly come out of their shells when it comes to engaging in heavy PDA… ever since their move to Denver, that is. With the less judgy eyes from their hometown, Stan thought it meant more simpler times. That is until his kinky past from high-school reared its ugly head at a public parking lot—thanks to a certain no good sociopath amongst his group of friends.