[MF] The cute girl next door.

So imagine this –
You’re a shy girl, mostly an introvert and you live with your parents. One day a new neighbour moves in.
A few days pass, and on one occasion as you’re going out you see me. Ive moved in to the room next door. We both make eye contact and we instantly find each other attractive. I smile at you and just say hi. You smile and walk away.

The next night you’re in your room in your pjs just watching a movie. You hear a guy and a girl just giggling and shuffling about outside so you just take a peek outside your window and you see me with another girl. We’re going up to my room, which is in full view of yours. You stand by the edge of your window, trying not to be seen and you peek into my room. You see me enter and you see me making out with this other girl. Now, you’re just curious to see where this leads to. Your heart starts beating a bit more intensely. Not because i might catch you being a voyeur but because you’ve always wanted a guy to completely take control of you like the way i was to that girl.

My first foray into writing erotica. Feedback appreciated!

Disclaimer – I’m a 28 year old guy. As I’ve stated above this is my first time writing something as this. I have never written anything before. This is pretty much just based on my fantasies. So in my perspective. I am looking for some feedback especially from a female audience as i want to target this towards them. Anyway, i hope it’s decent :p

That one amazing day…

I was finally heading to Scotland. To meet the girl I’d been aching to see. My flight touched down around 7 in the evening. Went through all the regular formalities of getting out of the airport. All this while I was so restless. Just waiting to see her. It had been almost a year of just between getting to know her and constant sexts. So the excitement was just pouring out. And that’s when I see her. She looked striking. The previous day we had decided on what she would be wearing. A light pink top and a very short grey skirt. No panties no bra. I get out, give her the biggest hug ever and a small peck on her lips. Lots more was going to follow. We get in her car and head towards her place, catching up on things on the way. But we knew what we really wanted. It was around 10pm and raining as we entered her driveway. She had a beautiful cozy little house in a very nice neighborhood. She stopped the car half way and looked at me. She gave me that , ” I’m here, I’m yours, take me right here right now” kinda look. She was right in front of me now and I was completely frozen. Where do I start? My mind was rushing through thoughts and it suddenly stopped. I felt her lips on mine. Everything was a blur. Her lips felt so delicate and soft. I kissed back, lightly tugging at her lip. She then slowly reached for my hand and put it on her thighs. I knew what I wanted. By body started to wake up now. I slid my hand slowly between her thighs, dragging my nails along. We stopped kissing as both of our breaths started getting intense. Our foreheads resting against each other, I reached for her pussy. Wet was an understatement. She was drenched. As I ran my finger over her sticky clit her whole body just quivered. I pulled my hand out and tasted her. Exquisite. I got out of the car, walked over to her side, opened the door, helped her out, and immediately lifted her up to the roof of the car. One leg on my shoulder and the other resting on the open door, I just dived for her pussy. One arm on her ass cheeks, the other holding the leg, I feasted on her pink wet folds. Her pussy was so succulent. Pink, juicy, tender and ripe. We were getting drenched in the rain but none of that mattered. I sucked and pulled at her clit making her moan out loud. I properly ate her out rubbing my tongue all over her sweet little clit. Then I turned her around, dropped my pants down half way, and just slowly sat down on the cold wet pavement, my back resting against the car. I wanted to fuck her right there. I slowly pulled her down on me, and our bodies fit in perfectly, like two parts meant for each other. My throbbing cock locked inside her tight little pussy. We both hug eachother and just start fucking like two madly in love people who just couldn’t be separated. I just wanted to hold her tight and fuck her and never stop. I clenched her hair tight and bite her nipples every time I felt her pussy squeeze my cock hard. In that cold night, in the rain, her pussy felt so warm it was beyond perfect. I lifted her up and decided to move in. I keep ploughing into her as we made our way to the door. She opens it, we walk in, still fucking. Her house was beautiful. Small but cozy. She had a fireplace, which was already lit. I laid her down next to it. We were just drenched, panting and so much in love. We took our clothes off and got completely naked. I lifted her legs up, and opened em wide. I went straight for her pussy again. I licked her ass and pussy switching between the two every now and then. I kept eating her so madly, relishing and savouring every little bit. Sliding my tongue in out, licking every bit. I kept going non stop. I lost count of how many times I made her cum. All I focused on was making love to her. After what was possible a few hours of ravaging her pussy, I lay next to her. We both stared at eachother. She looked so fucking hot. The girl I’ve been desiring for so long, laying next to me. She looked out of breath from the number of times I made her cum. With one leg of hers over my hips, and the other between my legs, I slowly guided my cock into her pussy. Immediately her pussy greeted my cock with a tight squeeze. We just lay there, kissing. I kissed her till she was relaxed. I held her close to me, clinging to her tightly and started to push my cock deeper. With her head resting against my chest, and my arms tight around her, I started to fuck her harder. Her moans made me fuck her faster and more intense. She started licking my neck my chin, we go back to making out so passionately. She looked at me with hungry eyes, moaning ” Take me!…Take me..fuck me like I’m your little slut!!..make me yours!!!..” That’s when I lose it. I fuck her like there’s no tomorrow. She starts moaning and screaming and writhing in pleasure as I fuck her so uncontrollably!
Both of us lost in eachother. It was sex like never before. Two people couldn’t have wanted each other more. Two people couldn’t have made love and fucked each other any more passionately than we were. She couldn’t hold it any more. I couldn’t either. She hugged me so tight. I embraced her tighter. We hugged so tight we ourselves could barely breathe. All that lust, all that love, all that pent up feeling of making her mine, just exploded between us. We both started to cum so madly, it was unreal. At this point, i cannot find words in my vocabulary to describe that moment. The way we felt and the way we fucked… beyond spectacular. I end up cumming so fucking hard over and over again inside her. And she cums so madly on me. Both of us , panting and moaning, still hugging each other as tight as ever. Our bodies still fucking frenzily. ” I wanna cum again” she moaned. At this point I only knew one thing. TO NOT STOP FUCKING HER. We kept going. I was just lost in feelings. We fucked and fucked and fucked until she came again, squeezing every drop of my cum off my cock. I loved her so much to not let go. We kept going. The soreness in my cock was overshadowed by how fucking good she kept riding me. We were on a fuck filled frenzy, kissing and licking and moaning and just orgasms after orgasms after orgasms. I never wanted it to end…

My fantasy meet-up with a girl I met online.

Hey guys. So I just recently got into writing some erotica. I wrote a small piece about how I think it’d turn out if I met a girl that I’d met online. Never actually happened though so lol to that. But if anyone is interested do hit me up? I’d like to know if it’s any good. I have written a few other scenes as well but not really sure if they’re shareworthy haha :p

[M/F] That one memorable day.

Hey guys, I started writing erotica just recently. I wrote this just a few days back. It’s just based on one my countless fantasies lol. Would love to hear what some of you think of it and how/where I can make it better.

[mf] That one amazing night…

This is just a short scene based on one of my fantasies. Do give it a read and lemme know what you think. I only started writing recently so do excuse any grammatical errors. Also if you’re a writer you can share your stories with me too.