*This is my first legit piece of writing so don’t be too harsh. I would like and warmly welcome some constructive criticism on how to improve my writing.*
A man is taken by a succubus in a time of weakness and turned into the woman he was meant to be.
Chapter 1
George was walking home from his job at ‘Jude’s Law Offices’ when he was pushed into an alley by a group of four men. They were taller than him by at least a foot because he was only 5’1”, and way more muscular. He could be mistaken for a girl if he’d lost weight and used make-up. The guy George assumed was the leader stepped forward and flicked out a switchblade.
“Hey, pretty-boy. Why don’t you open up that wallet of yours and show us what’s inside?” He pointed the knife at his briefcase and kept eye contact with George.