jjjhhjj, Author at NSFW story

When you say “(obviously not her real name)” it just takes away from the story, even if it’s just a little bit. Just use a fake name; you don’t have to tell us it’s a fake name. Also, for god sakes please stop using initials in place of first names.

So E said to R that L was being really bitchy and that D wouldn’t do anything about it.

That shit is fucking impossible to follow, just pick a fake name.

/rant