Meeting his Muse

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The birds chirped in the morning sunlight, as the young man slowly awoke from his slumber. He slowly stirred and eventually got out of bed. He stretched and looked in the mirror as a sunbeam fell over his body. Fascinated by the movement of shadows over his skin, he watched as the light danced over his thighs, torso, and backside. He leaned over to touch his toes, and chuckled as he looked in the mirror, and noticed his ass jiggle in the morning light. 

A thought popped into his mind as he revved up for the day, of the woman with whom he had such a complicated and fraught inter-linkage of paths. He thought she liked him at first, but it turned out that actually, she loved ass, and nothing but the butt. Guy or girl, she couldn’t resist a cute curvy butt, and once she found out about his submissive desires and fantasies….

My first story-feedback please

Hi there all, hope you’re all having a lovely day. I’m an aspiring writer and would really love some comments and advice from readers and writers of erotica, please. This is my first attempt at writing erotica properly and I really hope you enjoy!

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Please let me know what you’d like me to write next.

Thanks!

Published
Categorized as Erotica

Noob looking for advice

Hi there! Hope I can get some help, advice and feedback here. I just wrote my first 1000 words, but I’m really struggling for a plan or idea of how to get people to read it and get feedback. I”m really curious and eager to do more of this as I feel there’s a lot of demand!

Any suggestions for a noob, any pointers for online communities I can ask for more help?
A couple of early readers hae told me to make it much steamier, and I agree with this myself to a great extent, just nervous about how well the writing style is and whether I should attempt to make things a bit hotter and more detailed.

Part 1 of the story can be read at [www.smuttytales.blogspot.com](https://www.smuttytales.blogspot.com/)

Thanks, and hope to get some advice on how write better and reach more readers!