Plague of vengeance [sci-fi/fantasy] [rape] [gunplay] [gangbang] this is just a small part of a story I’m working on that I’m hoping to get some feedback it’s not centerally sexual but there will be full sex scenes in the future

Plague of vengeance

Chapter 1
breakout
The wind howled across the mountain the middle of an intense blizzard the cold would kill any man that dared step out into cutting through any layers right into the bone and perhaps even the soul. The remote research facility stood defiant against the blizzards wrath. As Silvana looked down upon it from above a top a cliff nearly half a mile above with her personal stealth ship cloaked a few dozen yards behind her. With her cybernetic eyes she scanned the structure thoroughly. Despite the fatal cold she sat at the edge down on one knee. Her body was like a skin tight latex suit that never curled or wrinkled around the joints. Making her body appear perfectly covered and rounded on her ass and breasts which were of notable sizes. Her figure was a tall six feet eight inches. The latex like material had a bold hexagonal pattern across every inch of it. Only visible when the light hit her there were deep grooves along her body as well running up from her feet along the outside of her legs. Curving around her waist like a thong would large circles on either side of her hips, and on all her joints. The grooves glowed a fiery orange on and off slowly but for the moment she was dark as the night around her trying not to be seen. At the base of her neck the black material fades into a human like skin white as the snow around her. The face slender and angular her lips thick with black lipstick on them. Her eyes appeared human but still glowed ever so slightly with the same fiery orange that would normally pulse across her body. Black hair pulled back in a pony tail that reached down past her ass.

The ride [gangbang] [public]

THE RIDE

You’re average Monday morning a school buss packed with kids of various ages all sitting in their clicks. The good kids in front, the sleepers in the mid, and the “naughty kids in the back”. We’re one senior in particular named Jason is well known.

A typical jock who’s only goal is to get in every girls pants. Larger than most at 6’5 with black hair slicked back. Long basketball nylon shorts a simple white t shirt and an aggressive attitude. Jason sits in his seat alone surrounded by his senior friends. Cracking jokes about his latest conquest. When it catches his eye a girl he never seen before. A new girl getting on the bus for her first big day in a new school as she walks down nervously looking for a seat. Jason checking her thin young body in a short wavy skirt black with a sexy little laced thong that Jason and his boys got a split second look at. A tight slipnot t short short hot pink hair and a sliver nose stud.

THE RIDE [gangbang, public,]

THE RIDE

You’re average Monday morning a school buss packed with kids of various ages all sitting in their clicks. The good kids in front, the sleepers in the mid, and the “naughty kids in the back”. We’re one senior in particular named Jason is well known.

A typical jock who’s only goal is to get in every girls pants. Larger than most at 6’5 with black hair slicked back. Long basketball nylon shorts a simple white t shirt and an aggressive attitude. Jason sits in his seat alone surrounded by his senior friends. Cracking jokes about his latest conquest. When it catches his eye a girl he never seen before. A new girl getting on the bus for her first big day in a new school as she walks down nervously looking for a seat. Jason checking her thin young body in a short wavy skirt black with a sexy little laced thong that Jason and his boys got a split second look at. A tight slipnot t short short hot pink hair and a sliver nose stud.