Give and Take: part 2 (consensual non consent) (d/s) (M44/F28) (shibari) (rough body play) (struggle)

This is a continuation of a fantasy I have been writing about my Dom and I. This still isn’t complete but I thought I would share the next segment! Look at my other posts for the lovely slow build up of part 1. Thanks for reading <3 please comment if you have anything nice to say or advice! This is my first erotica that I’m sharing…..

*names changed*

Sub: cis female 28 years old, sub/masochist

Dom: cis male 44 years old, dom/disciplinarian/saddist

“Now turn around and kiss me.”

I turn around to kiss you but you forcefully push me up against the wall, gripping my shoulders, fingers digging roughly into my skin pinning my hands down by my sides.

“Actually I’ve changed my mind, You don’t get a kiss.”

I see the challenge in your eyes. I try to pull my arms free and twist my body out from your grip. A slight smile twitches across your face,

“You’re going to have to try harder than that Claire.”

Give and Take [M44/F28] [CNC] [Breath play] [oral] [slapping] [d/s]

This is the first time I’m sharing my erotica! I usually just write my fantasies in my journal when I’m feeling really horny and need to get the thoughts out of my head. I told my Dom that I was fantasizing about us doing a Consensual Non Consent scene while I was masturbating and he asked me to describe it to him. I started to describe the scene as I saw it in my head and he told me I should try writing it out fully into erotica. He knows erotica is my favorite way to get off. I’ve been having a lot of fun writing this and am looking forward to showing him when it’s finished. This story takes place in his house, doing our normal routine… but spiced up 😉
The story is obviously not complete, but I want to know if it’s off to a good start? I think it’s hot…but it’s about me and my Dom, so I’m biased 😅
If some people enjoy it, I promise to share the finished version.

Thanks for reading!