a first try at a story. I do have an ending in my head but would like to know if its any good sofar

A couple of months before Halloween I told my girlfriend that she could pick out my Halloween costume. It could be anything she liked. a few days later she said she wanted me to have a full body wax shave, I would only do that if it was for charity and of she good 10k worth of donations I would have a full make over which I thought would be a high enough that u would not happen. 
the night befor the big shave she revealed she had actually good way more than I thought would be possible and she raised 65k to my uterbelive… ‘how did you manage that’ I said jasmine looked with a massive devilish grin ‘ 3 big money spenders came into work for an investment meeting and ask if we give you 10k would she go on a date with us separately, I told them for 20k each. so you now must stay a girl full time for atlest 3 weeks assuming you can have a date once per week on a Friday night and my boss has offered you a job as a girl for the three weeks but it can be extend if needed or of you want to extend that is.’ I look on with a blank face thinking how in the world did she manage that I couldn’t belive it ‘one last thing I’m live streaming your makeover from start to finish and hopefully we can get more donations well that’s what I’ve told everyone hehe’ Jasmine said all giddly and then skip away like a school girl.