This is one of my first few times writing in this genre so any constructive criticism is welcome. I hope you enjoy
For 18 yr old Caleb going to church on Sunday was something he only did because of his mother. Caleb absolutely hated going because in his eyes it was just a way they government indoctrinated it’s people. He didn’t believe that there was some higher power who pulled the strings of what we call life. But if he had to go to church at least he would get to see his best friend Cherish.
Caleb and Cherish had been friends since they met in Sunday school back when they were in 3rd grade. He always had a crush on her, and he felt like she felt the same about him but he was always too nervous to make a move. Cherish was the definition of a southern bell; She was the preacher’s daughter, and she had long blonde hair, eyes as blue as the ocean, and a body that would make a model blush. Caleb knew that she was out of his league; because Caleb was a big guy weighing in at 280lbs but on his 6’4 frame he carried it well but definitely Well enough for a girl like Cherish to be interested in him. Well all that was about to change!