For some reason, my other account can’t find it access r/Erotica. So, this is not a stolen story. I am the author of it. This is a small excerpt from a Novel I am working on. It has not been edited at all. I am trying to get a feel of what readers think about where they story line should go. Any input is welcome. This is the first book I have written and I’m looking for all constructive criticism. TYIA! Best always, Fae
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Pulling the SUV in to the lodge Cruz smiled as he watched Grace admire the celebration in main room. The floor to ceiling glass windows throughout offered a picture show of the men and women laughing and dancing while beats of music slipped through the cracks of the door and into the early evening air.
“You want to go in? I can drop you off and go park the car,” Cruz asked stopping the car just before the parking area of the lodge while stroking her hand with his thumb. Grace leaned over and placed her hand on Cruz’s gorgeous face. She studied his persimmon lips and high strong cheekbones then licked her lips before gazing in to the almost cobalt blue eyes that have come to be her kryptonite.