My SO and I are doing a few challenges, and in the past I’ve written a few stories for her. After a big family holiday she suggested I write up one of our experiences. This was a two part challenge though; and the next part was to release it. I’ve never put anything I’ve written online before (or let anyone read it) and this is a bit rough but let me know what you think, as I’m a bit nervous. For me this one is a bit different for me as it’s not fantasy!
If it goes well I’ll use this throw away to post more.
Bubbles swirled past us, each catching the light and making the water seem bright and alive. I looked at you and let out a short breath. People were too close, they were in reality just meters away from the hot tub and it would only take a moment for them to look out the window and see us. It felt like physical chains holding us back; but you looked so tempting.