I am trying to change the writing style to make it more engaging, hopefully.
After our love-making session on the night of the party, I and B were smitten with each other, every time we saw each other could not stop smiling and thinking about that night. Grad school’s busy schedule did not make it easier for us to spend more time or have another go at fucking each other’s brains out but maybe it was destined to be a one-night stand.
Boy, I was wrong, I was at a mall looking for some casual clothes when I saw B, she was wearing simple jeans and a shirt but God, she looked hot. I went over and said Hi, she mentioned that she was there helping a friend out. We chatted for a bit just ambling around, but I could sense she wanted more as did I. I pointed out a cute shirt and told her that she would look good in it, with some initial resistance she agreed to try it out. She went to the trial room while I waited outside, she looked stunning on the top, she asked me if I wanted to see how some of the other clothes look on her – I was very happy too.