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A Summer Stroll
It was a beautiful sunny summer day in July. The sun was shining and a wonderful breeze was blowing in the air. Jillian had just finished getting ready for the day by putting on her new favourite sundress she was excited to get out and enjoy the day. The dress was light and brightly coloured. It flowed and moved gently with every step and it came to just above the knee. Just as she poured her self a cup of coffee to enjoy she felt a buzz on her phone.
She waited until she was settled with her coffee at the table in her back yard to check the message. Her heart racing the entire time knowing it was message from Eric her new boyfriend. They had been seeing each other for a few weeks and only recently opened up to each other about their more exciting desires. He had asked her to leave today open for something he had planed. The only thing he had asked the night before was for her to be ready by 10 am dressed in a sundress and to await his first text.