Erotic Short Help

So, recently I wrote an erotic short story that I think would be pretty good on here and say Tumblr. This is my first go round with something like this and I am looking for someone to help put a little “polish” on the story.

The story is a fantasy based on a rather graphic exchange on Kik. When I sent it to the person for whom I had wrote the story, it was met with “juicy” success. Haha, I know at least one person could appreciate it.

I don’t think I want to copyright it or anything, but I don’t want to lose credit for it if it turns out to be popular (maybe wishful thinking, but would be cool).

Any help or ideas to go about this would be most welcome.