Good day. I wrote a short fantasy story with elements of violence. The main character is a young man.
I am not a native speaker of English, so I would like to receive criticism or learn about mistakes in English. Thank you!
Illustration for the story: https://imgur.com/8ZWWCO0
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One way to arrest a criminal is to put him under you and stand until other guards arrive and take him to the dungeon.
The young and inexperienced guard did not know what to do when the criminal began to touch his legs. The guard demanded to stop, but the criminal did not listen to him and continued to tenderly cosset the guard’s legs. It would have been foolish to succumb to temptation, but the guard could not refuse. He stood and felt these rough man’s hands touch his hips, slowly approaching his panties.
The guard was pleased to feel the caress of his feet, but he wanted more.