[PROOFREADERS WANTED] I am writing a story and would like someone to help catch my mistakes.

Dirty BDSM type story it’s 2 parts and growing. Each part is around 10,000 words I would just like someone besides myself to proofread it before I start posting it properly. Also I’m struggling with a decent title.

M/F switch, bondage, stretching, body mod, diaper, humiliation, back and forth one-upping….probably other tags I’m forgetting.