decent start? [Nsfw]

I’m an amateur writer, what are your tips for me.

Thanks in advance

An amazing person.

I want to stare into a lover’s eye.
Take her hand and pull It close, hug her to me, enjoy the shared warmth and peaceful release of oxytocin.

I want to feel her curves over her clothes with my hands, feel our chests moving against each other’s with each breath.

Nibble her ears and I massage her hips, kiss her neck as I move my hands to her shoulder blades.

I need her to know how much I want her, I need her- how much desire I have for her to claim me, and for her to let me do my best to set her on fire.

I want her to push me against the wall, where I let her be aggressive til I decide to push back,

My hands up and down her back, from the hips to her shoulder blades, gently laying her down on the bed, staring into her eyes as I tell her how amazing she is.