Hey everyone. This is my first time posting here, so I’d really appreciate any changes/criticisms to my writing. Hope you enjoy it.
We get back to our hotel room after our date. We’ve had a lovely dinner, and a few drinks, and I’m starting to feel frisky. ‘Not yet, baby’, you toy with me, ‘We’ll have our fun in a while’. I let go, while you go to the washroom, and start to wash your face. You leave the door open, and wink at me as you go in. Confused, yet feeling lusty, I pick myself off the bed and follow you. You look at me through the mirror and ask, ‘Did I look pretty today?’. As if you didn’t know the answer to that question (YES! A THOUSAND FUCKING TIMES YES!!!). I nod at you, slowly running my eyes up and down your body, taking your beauty in. I step forward, and hold you below the waist. I can feel you shudder with excitement. I part the hair behind your neck, and give you a kiss. ‘Yes, my sweetheart. You looked absolutely gorgeous today.’