collection of stories you shouldn't read at work
I wrote my first Erotic Shortstory and I would love some feedback!
My first language isn’t English so please bear with me if there are some mistakes.. I hope you’ll enjoy it, I know I enjoyed writing it ;)
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Hi guys! So, I wrote my first ever Erotic Shortstory and I would love some feedback! Also, english isn’t my first language so please bear with me for spelling mistakes etc.. Other than that, I hope you’ll enjoy it, I know I enjoyed writing it.. ;)
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