[Fantasy] [Snippet]
(I am new to reddit. This is a snippet of a story I have been working on. I just wanted to see what people thought. Any opinion, criticism or thoughts would be greatly appreciated.)
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Unannounced, she jiggled the handle to the door. That was the only other place she could imagine him being. Happy that it opened, she entered. At first, corruption was nowhere in sight. The corridor was dark. She pulled out her phone, turning on the torch. The internal wood work was wonderful, but needed a coat of paint. There were electrical cables sticking out of the wall, where switches, plugs and light placement would go.
The warm nature of the house was a comforting contrast to the dark aboding atmosphere. Some furniture and lights is all it would take to make this a home. Decorating was all she could think about to distract herself from the fear that rumbled in the pit of her stomach. She didn’t feel close to corruption here, not even to the garden. If she was killed or kidnapped, would anyone know where to look for her?