Author: crimson_fog

(ch.3)first time writing. need thoughts and constructive criticism. mostly need help in conversations(SPH)(femdom)

Chapter III

(The beach)

The honeymooners wrapped up the weirdest day of their lives and now are ready to begin a new one. Eric and Jessica woke up, had their coffee and breakfast in bed just like the previous day. Then they started to get ready to go to the beach with their new friends. Jessica was super excited and eager to get ready fast, she didn’t want to be late. Eric on the other hand wasn’t as eager, in fact he was trying to think of a way out of their date, but his brain was still in a fog from last night’s events.

They get ready and head to the lobby to meet Bruce and crystal. Crystal was waiting for them and told them to hurry up. Bruce rented a van and a driver to take them to a beach about thirty minutes away; they have been to it before and love it. They all put their things in the trunk and get in. This was a really fancy Mercedes van with the black leather seats facing each other. Bruce opens a built-in chiller and takes out a bottle of champagne, opens it and pours everyone a glass. Read more »

first time writing. need thoughts and constructive criticism. mostly need help in conversations(SPH)(femdom)

Introduction

The Covid pandemic hit some people hard, but not everyone. For Eric and Jessica it was a blessing, the lockdown brought them closer together. They were both very happy together; they met in college at a party, Jessica at the time was a freshman and Eric was just about to graduate. They continued dating for four years until Jessica graduated from college, then Eric proposed to her that summer. For Eric everything was going according to plan; he got a job right after graduation at a big investment corporation. He is charismatic, smart and worked hard. He had saved enough money to become a freelance investment advisor, and became very successful right away. The happy couple got married in march.2020. The Lockdown was in order soon after and travel was banned. But Eric and Jessica were not too upset about it, yes they could not go on their honeymoon, but they could spend alone time together as newlyweds; and grow their relationship much stronger. Eric was at the right place at the right time. Business boomed for him soon after; he made a lot of money, and so in the summer of 2021 he decided to take his bride on their belated honeymoon to a Caribbean paradise island. Read more »

(ch.5)first time writing. need thoughts and constructive criticism. mostly need help in conversations(SPH)(femdom)

Ch.V

(The un-manning of Mr. Jones)

The trio arrives at the suite; Bruce opens the door naked; his cock swinging between his legs. As Bruce had been sitting in the hot tub, his cock and scrotum relaxed in the hot water, they seemed to hang even lower than Jessica remembers; his cock seemed to almost reach his knees, even though he is a tall man. Crystal pulls the towel off of Jessica revealing her gorgeous naked body.

Crystal: Bruce, Jessica is upset. Take her to the hot tub, get her a drink and take care of her, I’ll take care of baby boy over here.

Bruce: come dear, relax in the hot water. Bruce will take good care of you.

Bruce leads Jessica to the hot tub then gets drinks for the two of them. He gets in the hot tub with Jessica and pulls her over to sit between his legs and lay her back on his chiseled torso, while giving her a neck rub. She sat there between his rock hard thighs, his cock snaking beneath her, coming out from under her vagina and still looking massive. She can’t help but feel a longing to this massive cock, she craves it, and she just wants to grab it. Meanwhile, crystal was done preparing a now submissive Eric. Crystal leads Eric to the hot tub with a towel wrapped around his waist. ‘Are you ready for the big reveal? Or should I say: the small reveal?’ she pulls off the towel exposing Eric’s penis locked in a little pink cock cage. Read more »

(ch.4)first time writing. need thoughts and constructive criticism. mostly need help in conversations(SPH)(femdom)

Chapter IV

(The reckoning)

As Bruce and crystal go to their suite to get the hot tub ready, Eric and Jessica got to their room to shave Eric’s manhood. Jessica orders Eric to get to get into the shower while she gets the razor. Eric stands there in the shower while Jessica squats in front of him to give him a good shave.

Jessica: spread your legs so I can get in there…. Oh my god, today was just unbelievable, I never thought the nude beach would be so much fun. The freedom of being completely naked in public was just amazing. Must’ve been super embarrassing for you though, having the smallest dick on that beach…. I mean wow, out of hundreds of dicks on that beach, yours was literally the smallest. I mean I know it’s what you have and all, but I mean, I wished it was at least like normal. But no, it’s like you were a different species out there. And when it inverted into your body….. Wow, you looked like a girl, especially with your bush. Let’s see how it will look now all shaved and clean, maybe it will start to look like a normal man’s penis. Ok, all done… let’s see (Jessica dries him up and stares at Eric’s shaved manhood). Ok, well it definitely looks a bit bigger…. I mean I can see it now, but…. I’m sorry dear; it looks like a little prepubescent boy’s penis. Well, at least it’s better than looking like a pussy. Read more »

(ch.3)first time writing. need thoughts and constructive criticism. mostly need help in conversations(SPH)(femdom)

Chapter III

(The beach)

The honeymooners wrapped up the weirdest day of their lives and now are ready to begin a new one. Eric and Jessica woke up, had their coffee and breakfast in bed just like the previous day. Then they started to get ready to go to the beach with their new friends. Jessica was super excited and eager to get ready fast, she didn’t want to be late. Eric on the other hand wasn’t as eager, in fact he was trying to think of a way out of their date, but his brain was still in a fog from last night’s events.

They get ready and head to the lobby to meet Bruce and crystal. Crystal was waiting for them and told them to hurry up. Bruce rented a van and a driver to take them to a beach about thirty minutes away; they have been to it before and love it. They all put their things in the trunk and get in. This was a really fancy Mercedes van with the black leather seats facing each other. Bruce opens a built-in chiller and takes out a bottle of champagne, opens it and pours everyone a glass. Read more »

(ch.2)first time writing. need thoughts and constructive criticism. mostly need help in conversations(SPH)(femdom)

Chapter II

(Revelation)

Eric and Jessica get to their room and stumble into the shower. They are both slightly drunk and tired from being in the sun all day. They both strip off and Jessica’s eyes are transfixed on Eric’s penis. Eric noticed, he knows that look, he has seen it before.

Jessica: you really do have a small penis dear, don’t you?

Eric: ummmmm I guess it’s not as big as other guys….

(As they continue to shower….)

Jessica: yeah…. Did you see Bruce… he is massive!

Eric: ummm yeah I guess….

Jessica: having sex with him must really painful for crystal…. Not like yours it just slides in no problem….. Sometimes I don’t even feel it inside until you tell me….

She says with a giggle, then turns off the water and kisses and hugs him. They both then rap towels around their waists and leave the bathroom. Jessica heads to the balcony and sits out there. Eric follows her.

Eric: you really enjoy being topless now, don’t you?

Jessica: yeah it’s liberating.

Eric: people might see you… Read more »

first time writing. need thoughts and constructive criticism. mostly need help in conversations(SPH)(femdom)

Introduction

The Covid pandemic hit some people hard, but not everyone. For Eric and Jessica it was a blessing, the lockdown brought them closer together. They were both very happy together; they met in college at a party, Jessica at the time was a freshman and Eric was just about to graduate. They continued dating for four years until Jessica graduated from college, then Eric proposed to her that summer. For Eric everything was going according to plan; he got a job right after graduation at a big investment corporation. He is charismatic, smart and worked hard. He had saved enough money to become a freelance investment advisor, and became very successful right away. The happy couple got married in march.2020. The Lockdown was in order soon after and travel was banned. But Eric and Jessica were not too upset about it, yes they could not go on their honeymoon, but they could spend alone time together as newlyweds; and grow their relationship much stronger. Eric was at the right place at the right time. Business boomed for him soon after; he made a lot of money, and so in the summer of 2021 he decided to take his bride on their belated honeymoon to a Caribbean paradise island. Read more »