It was a crisp fall day. The air was refreshing, but it had a bite to it. Samantha shivered drawing her robe tight as she stood in front of the open door at the back of her house. Closing it behind her and walking into the bedroom, she decided she would need to dress warm for the trip into the city today. Standing there for a moment lost in thought, she contemplated the list. Pick up a backpack for her daughter, fill up the truck with gas and make a stop at Costco. Oh, and she remembered she was also supposed to meet with her friend for coffee.
Author: confusticateme
I can’t stop thinking about her: My first attempt at an erotic story and I would love to hear your critique on my style.
This is the beginning of a story I want to write about a passionate affair between close friends that couldn’t control their urges.
I’ve never written anything like this before but I have this idea in my head and it just needs to come out. What do you think about the writing style and flow? Is there anything that I should work on? Any pointers would be greatly appreciated!
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It was a crisp fall day. The air was refreshing, but it had a bite to it. Samantha shivered drawing her robe tight as she stood in front of the open door at the back of her house. Closing it behind her and walking into the bedroom, she decided she would need to dress warm for the trip into the city today. Standing there for a moment lost in thought, she contemplated the list. Pick up a backpack for her daughter, fill up the truck with gas and make a stop at Costco. Oh, and she remembered she was also supposed to meet with her friend for coffee.